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big bear is knocking
high time to absquatulate
right out the back door
high time to absquatulate
right out the back door
Absquatulate!
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Well, Goldilocks of “Three Bears” fame was never one for long conversations; she cut right to the point and was rather brief in the rare times she spoke, so based on that, I believe this haiku is a rather strong way to emphasise that point of her character. Even more so given it was a pivotal point of the story.
Not to mention, it doesn’t hurt to learn new words like “absquatulate” which I could use for my own work, so thanks for that.
With these very few words, you’ve done a nice job giving us Goldy’s inner thoughts and putting a fresh twist on an otherwise classic story. Keep up the good work!