literature

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Literature Text

god creates this world
as a thought experiment

he wants to find out

if there will be anyone
who will think to be thinking
'therefore'
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Hello, I'm from GrammarNaziCritiques but in order to leave a proper critique on your poem, I need a question to respond to. It can be anything, such as "Does this poem flow?" "Is the message conveyed well?" "How does X work here?" Once you've asked something, I will better understand how to help you improve :) Thank you.