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Weekly Fishing Report 1

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'Fishing for Comments 1'
Old Mule is fishing,
A pier in the dA sea.
Crabs eating his bait,
They're subtly cleaning his hook
Without a tug or a twitch!

'Fishing for Comments 2'
The fish are jumping,
Right on to the dA dock.
Comments are flying
Up out of the electrons
The nibble crabs are hiding!

'Fishing for Comments 3'
The Cats are sleeping,
Old Mule is down on the dock.
He's watching his lines
Conversing with a mermaid
Down there by the dA sea.

'Fishing for Comments 4'
On the dA dock,
Old Mule's lines are all quite slack.
Low tide is turning,
The invisible nibblers
Keeping him good company!

'Fishing for Comments 5'
He forgot his bait,
Dock is empty, tide is out.
An old and slow night
Full of rumbles and twinges
The dawn a long time coming.

'Fishing for Comments 6'
Old Mule is resting,
Stretched out on his dA dock.
His lines are pulled up
Occasional mermaids wave
The shy nibblers come and go.

'Fishing for Comments 7'
Beautiful mermaids,
Old Mule hears them from his dock.
Such sweet enticements,
Old Mule knows he cannot swim
But he's happy to listen!
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copper9lives's avatar
Oh, I love #5... wishing you many siren songs, my friend.